I love the idea of a brochure. This made what can be a very broad topic a nice easy read. You really did a good job making the information made sense and be concise. Good job. I also liked all the visuals on it.
The brochure was beautifully designed! The contents in the brochure are rich and informative! Excellent group work!
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1. I am not sure about the purpose of your brochure. Is it for recruiting the adult learners? or is it to report the project you have completed? If it is to report the project you have completed, you may add the information such as:
Katelyn and John will present their XXX project on April 24 at XXX, please come and join us....
In their presentation, their will report four main components of their project, which includes literature review........Please check the main ideas of each component in this flyer. If you have questions, please contact... or check our blog....
Program investigated: use one sentence to tell us the purpose of program investigation so that readers will know the connections between program investigation and program you designed.
This brochure looks professionally designed. The layout is excellent and the content is concise and well written. I wish I was half this talented. Your explanation of experiential learning was great. The material in the brochure flowed quite naturally. The conclusions were quite insightful. Thank you for a good project.
I love the idea of a brochure. This made what can be a very broad topic a nice easy read. You really did a good job making the information made sense and be concise. Good job. I also liked all the visuals on it.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job ! The brochure was nice and well organized. Nice idea to create a brochure for your project demonstration.
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ReplyDeleteKatelyn and John,
ReplyDeleteThe brochure was beautifully designed! The contents in the brochure are rich and informative! Excellent group work!
Suggestions:
1. I am not sure about the purpose of your brochure. Is it for recruiting the adult learners? or is it to report the project you have completed? If it is to report the project you have completed, you may add the information such as:
Katelyn and John will present their XXX project on April 24 at XXX, please come and join us....
In their presentation, their will report four main components of their project, which includes literature review........Please check the main ideas of each component in this flyer. If you have questions, please contact... or check our blog....
Program investigated: use one sentence to tell us the purpose of program investigation so that readers will know the connections between program investigation and program you designed.
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This brochure looks professionally designed. The layout is excellent and the content is concise and well written. I wish I was half this talented. Your explanation of experiential learning was great. The material in the brochure flowed quite naturally. The conclusions were quite insightful. Thank you for a good project.
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John and Katelyn,
ReplyDeletePlease post both parts of your assignment (abstract and video/audio introduction) in one place. For example, you can move your Abstract here.
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