John Murray and Katelyn
Neary
Ball State University
EDAC 634
Dr. Chang
After designing the program,
“Experiential Learning Workshop and Immersion Course”, two
educators from diverse backgrounds evaluated our program. Educators
received a copy of the program and rationale to evaluate. Evaluators
answered questions including, “What they liked about the syllabus
design” and “What should be improved and why?”
BACKGROUND ABOUT EACH EVALUATOR
Suzan Davis, Evaluator One, has been an
English and Communication Instructor for over 20 years. Currently,
Suzan is an Adjunct English Communication faculty and professional
development coordinator at Ivy Tech Community College. Numerous
duties are performed as a professional development coordinator
including; planning luncheons, workshops, and seminars.
Nick Nelson, Evaluator Two, has been
the Deputy Executive Director for 10 years with The First Tee of
Monterey County, as well as a “Master-Level Coach” who helps
oversee professional development trainings for both The First Tee and
out-of-network non-profits seeking to gain expertise in team-building
and organizational development. He, along with the Executive
Director, oversees a staff of nearly thirty full-time and part-time
staff, and helps coordinate large-scale fundraisers and outreach
initiatives.
Evaluator One: Suzan Davis
Occupation: Adjunct
English and Communication facility and Professional Development
Coordinator at Ivy Tech Community College.
Evaluator One Suggestions:
This evaluator Suzan Davis, is an author and teaches college-level English and Communication Studies. I evaluate arguments, persuasion, and advanced English course material. I also prepare students to write and prepare speeches.
SYLLABUS DESIGN:
What I liked about the syllabus design is that by reading the short introduction, the writers neatly let the reader, or potential student know, exactly what to expect, which is a hands-on experience. This promise is followed by Aristotle's quote that uses few words to say volumes---"...we learn by doing them."
As someone who works with adult learners, non-traditional students and even baby-boomers, this teaching style works very well and aids in retention. It is less intimidating to adult learners who are often anxious when they first come into a classroom.
The activities, ice-breakers, are explained well. After the description of the activity, there is a small follow up that talks about what students will focus on after the experience. I would recommend that the benefit of each experience be made a little clearer, like the first example where students see it is an exercise to be less self-conscious. The third activity (blind walk) is commonly used and the description states the discussion will focus on how this translates to the workplace. I suggest putting a sentence about the WHY this experience is important in the workplace.
The conclusion states why this program is important. My translation is what students learn in the classroom and immediately be used in the real world, working environment.
ROOM FOR IMPROVEMENT:
You can see I highlighted and bolded my editing suggestions/comments such as little mechanical nuances like the running head. The biggest distraction for me was the use of the word "program". I began to wonder what it meant. Removing most instances would provide a dynamic syllabus.
Reflection
of Evaluator One
The evaluator has many qualifications
that provide her to be a reliable evaluator. The evaluator has taught
many seminars with the participants being adult learners, she has
been exposed to many of the activities mentioned in the program. The
evaluator is not completely familiar with RPM so she offers fresh
eyes and non-biased feedback.
I agree with the most of the evaluators
suggestions. There are some that are just plausible for this course.
One item being the over use of the word ‘program’. This is
difficult to completely remove or rename because then it could
confuse participants. I understand why this was pointed out as an
issue, but again it is not going to be changed for this program
design.
The evaluator provided very good
insight and suggestions to help improve our program design. This is
very much appreciated and helpful in creating the best program design
possible.
I would improve the program design by
following the Header rule. I did think that the title was too long,
but wasn’t sure what to do about it. There are a few other edits
(including switching out words to better describe a task).
Evaluator Two: Nick Nelson
Occupation: Deputy Executive
Director
Evaluator Two Suggestions
I am the Deputy
Executive Director for our local The First Tee chapter. As it
pertains to this discussion, I have a great deal of knowledge when it
comes to leading trainings, seminars, and interactive learning
environments. In my daily activities I evaluate my coaching staff by
a standardized evaluation form, or rubric, that aids in their growth
as youth development professionals. I also assist in the
organization and facilitation of our Level I, II, and III national
coaches training, and serve as a resource for coaches and
administrators throughout our network to ask for assistance.
SYLLABUS DESIGN
EVALUATION:
I was happy that
the syllabus was thorough in its breakdown and coordination of
events. Utilizing the team-building program within the larger course
itself I think was a wise decision, as it allows those involved to
gain an initial understanding of one another first, and then grow
upon this understanding with time still remaining to utilize this
knowledge. Very important for me, was that it seems as though the
entire program is rooted in active participation, or rather, doing as
opposed to simply telling. This is the way I choose to engage my
staff or trainees, and see a great deal of value in adopting this
learning style.
I think that this
format would benefit the students involved, but testimony or examples
as to specifically how they benefit would be even more powerful for
me. Perhaps this would need to be taken into consideration after the
initial program (since I gather this was a hypothetical syllabus),
and included in subsequent revisions of the syllabus.
AREAS FOR
IMPROVEMENT:
Again, I felt this
was a fairly comprehensive overview of the program, and did a good
job of laying out the activities and learning objectives. Any
criticism is fairly superficial. I might add diagrams or pictures of
the team-building activities since they might help clarify the
instructions a little more. I might also add examples of resources
prospective students might be able to review if they are unsure about
property management details and requirements. Perhaps even a short
video highlighting the benefits of this program with clips of
previous students would probably be a good selling tool.
Reflection of Evaluator
Two
The
evaluator has a long history of activity-based programming,
specifically with activities in the team-building workshop portion of
our program design. His suggestions for improvement are all valid,
as it seems he took a long view for the program's continued success.
The suggestions made are all plausible given actual implementation of
the program, e.g., having testimonials from previous students, or
video footage as a marketing tool for the course.
As far
as edits capable of being incorporated immediately, his idea to
include diagrams would prove beneficial to our syllabus and create a
greater degree of clarity. Moreover, having references for students
to utilize would make the learning experience less stressful and
greater access to proven resources. All totaled, these corrections
would serve to empower both the facilitators and learners in
completion of the program. His evaluation was very beneficial, not
just in lending advice for immediate corrections, but also pointing
out how this program could build upon itself moving forward.
CONCLUSION
The evaluators did a great job
reviewing, “Experiential Learning Workshop and Immersion Course”
program design. Each evaluator provided great recommendations and
suggestions to strengthen our program. The evaluators come from
various backgrounds and each provided a different view on the program
design; furthermore, this gave our team a more well-rounded
assessment. The evaluators identified the strong and weak components
of our syllabus design and all suggestions will be considered to
improve our design. The input from the various educators enhanced the
importance and practice of our program, while providing great
suggestions for improvement. The program creators would like to give
much appreciation to all the evaluators and their helpful
recommendations.
I can see why you felt the evaluators were qualified. They did a good job giving specific examples on how to improve. I like the program and how they set it up. I feel like students of all disciplines and majors would benefit. Kristy
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ReplyDeleteGroup 4 great job choosing highly qualified evaluators. The evaluators choice of words were very respectfully. It's always good to receive constructive criticism from a outside party.
ReplyDeleteWhat is a program?
ReplyDelete--- Here is an explanation from Merriam and Brockett's (2007) book entitled The profession and practice of adult education:
What is meant by this term is the total educational offerings of an institution or agency..., an activity designed for a particular clientele..., or a specific topical activity...A program can consist of activities of varying time lengths, ranging from ongoing programs to semester-length offerings to one-hour workshops. (Merriam & Brockett, 2007, p.16)
Bo
I would recommend that the benefit of each experience be made a little clearer, like the first example where students see it is an exercise to be less self-conscious. The third activity (blind walk) is commonly used and the description states the discussion will focus on how this translates to the workplace. I suggest putting a sentence about the WHY this experience is important in the workplace.
ReplyDeleteThe conclusion states why this program is important. My translation is what students learn in the classroom and immediately be used in the real world, working environment.
----- Very good suggestions!
Bo
I might add diagrams or pictures of the team-building activities since they might help clarify the instructions a little more. I might also add examples of resources prospective students might be able to review if they are unsure about property management details and requirements. Perhaps even a short video highlighting the benefits of this program with clips of previous students would probably be a good selling tool.
ReplyDelete----- These are really good suggestions!
Bo
Great job on the evaluators. They provided excellent feedback. The feedback they provided will help make your project design much stronger.
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ReplyDeleteBo
Adam introduced us to the First Tee program in my other EDAC course. Since I was already familiar with this program, it was nice to hear feedback from someone involved in such a successful organization. I think great advice was given - for example - using a video or incorporating pictures into the project to give it more visual aids.
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